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We lay in bed,
our fingers snaking their way toward each other,
and I listened to her
tell me stories
of Genesis, the beginning.

"When Adam ate of the fruit," she began.
"He choked as he swallowed,
realizing too late the seriousness
of what he had done;
his sin caught in his throat.

And so, the fruit then changed
and became part of his body.
A hard swell of flesh
rising under the skin,
it remained there for all time after
as a reminder of
man's disobedience."

"And that," she said, kissing my throat.
"Is where Adam's apples come from."

"And Eve?" I asked. "What of the fruit
she stole?"

"Eve," she sighed. "Was made to bear it."

Then she smiled as I spanned my hands
across her stomach.

For we were naked,
and we were not ashamed.
©2007-2009 ~ElectroBaby
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The piece that inspired the now ongoing "Projekt Genesis" (Read here: [link] or here [link] .) In short, it is "a group collaboration open to the community that wishes to breathe new life into the story that started it all, Adam and Eve." Would love to see you participate if you aren't already! :XD:

Anyhow, this paints pictures in my head: A cute little married couple, laying in bed late in the morning, just talking, possibly pregnant, or just being lustful.

I want you all to see it in your own way; this is just how I see it. I like to tell myself stories, especially lately of how things began, so this is just a product of that.


Just "Working Title" for now, cus I never did title this piece. Owned by Misty Dunlap, November 17, 2007 (though I wrote it in like September or October), a piece participating in the collaboration project of "Genesis."


Listening to Mika's "Grace Kelly."
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:heart: I love the image of this.. makes me smile :D

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Vegetarians taste better!

"Nothing is less real than realism. Details are confusing. It is only by selection, by elimination, by emphasis that we get at the real meaning of things." -Georgia O'Keeffe
and that makes me smile *beam*

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[link] - A group collaboration open to the community that wishes to breathe new life into the story that started it all, Adam and Eve. Interested? Click link for news article. XD
fave thanks bringer of my smiles!

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[link] - A group collaboration open to the community that wishes to breathe new life into the story that started it all, Adam and Eve. Interested? Click link for news article. XD
so odd it seemed like a mother and a child until the naked part, and your description.

good poem tho :D

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
Ahhhh! Now, that makes it creepy lol

Thanks!

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[link] - A group collaboration open to the community that wishes to breathe new life into the story that started it all, Adam and Eve. Interested? Click link for news article. XD
wow, this is amazing...and ended up not at all where i thought it was going to! an excellent surprise

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"Were it so easy."
~The Arbiter
haha yeah ^^;

welcome

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
I love it, a beautiful set-up. good take on the genesis story, I don´t think I could ever think of anything this good.

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It´s self-assigned penance for problems with easy solutions
-Death Cab For Cutie
Thank you *blush*

Where did you think it was going if I might ask?

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[link] - A group collaboration open to the community that wishes to breathe new life into the story that started it all, Adam and Eve. Interested? Click link for news article. XD

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