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An Unfinished Conversation by ~ElectroBaby:iconElectroBaby:



She said,
I'm trying to save the blue
and amber in your eyes
from the green taking over,
like the bruised color
down the ridge of your brow bone.
That vibration in your ribs,
well it's no reason to be alarmed;
it's just your heart,
and from the soreness of the tissue underneath
I can tell it's been beating
pretty hard.

These fingers found their way
into my hair as I told her,
as well as my body,
that I understood.

Don't think I haven't noticed those broken cuticles.
©2008-2009 ~ElectroBaby
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She said, "I want you to get better."

And I said, "I know."


And we just looked at each other.

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(c) Misty Dunlap, July 1st, 2008, 4:33 p.m.
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I love the comments.. something just so.. I don't know dramatic about it. Has a simple prettiness. I still like the first part (of the piece) as I always did, I'm not sure about the ending *shrug*. I'm glad you worked on it and posted it though :)

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Vegetarians taste better!

"Nothing is less real than realism. Details are confusing. It is only by selection, by
I like the body imagery in this piece; it makes the piece feel uniquely organic and living on its own.
Thank you :) Your body will talk to you more than some people know.

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Well, notice the title leaves it unfinished lol.

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lol true!

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Vegetarians taste better!

"Nothing is less real than realism. Details are confusing. It is only by selection, by
haven't read your stuff for a while, so here i go.

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Coder! How are you?

Don't read if you don't want to lol

How's your summer goin?

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Busy. Now a superviser at my job, so i have to work work work. But, i'm doing ok.

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Congrats on that. Glad to hear you're doing alright :D

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